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Tuesday, 16 October 2012

The Tsunami.

Ben is 8 years old he is a kind and lovely boy. He lives with his nana and her name is Granny Jojo, she is a grumpy mean old bully bag woman.

“Tsunami’’ “Tsunami”, “Tsunami”!!!!! Yelled  Ben the one morning while listening to the radio. “it's heading right for New York” “Ahhh” screamed his grumpy nana. People could hear them on the other side of the road.

Granny Jojo said “stop scaring people with this nonsense of yours” “But Granny Jojo” said Ben with puppy eyes  “NO not another word” replied Granny Jojo. The next thing they both heard were people on the streets below shouting “Here it comes. The tsunami”.

Looking at the drive way there was a flood caused by the tsunami.As Ben walked past to see what happened from the tsunami he was surpised to see all the other neighbours having fun.Joining in with the fun Ben diceded to stand on some bricks ready to jump off.
He jumped in the air with his arms up and his legs holding tight together.SPLASHH!!!!!   His arm had broken.


When Granny  pulled up Ben she quickly check and see If he was ok Granny  said “wake up Ben don’t you make me panic like that again.” When Ben woke up he found out he was in the hospital. “Mmmm Granny is that you?” said Ben “yes it is my sweet little angel” replied Granny. So Granny and BEN went home

1 comment:

Puawai said...

Hi Muamua It`s Puawai,

You have a good story about a Tsunami in New York.
I like the way you had some punctuation. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!

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